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I lie between sheets
with gentle lips, careful thighs,
and delicate fingertips;
shrouded with the comfort of
slow rain against darkened windows.

Passion -
candle-lit and flickering.

Anticipation -
swallowed in a deep crimson.

Lust -
breathing down my neck.



Fire.

Your flame forms and then moves,
stretching through rooms
across halls and up walls--

It calls.

Loudly it speaks and
lying silent in bed,
clinging to sheets,

I become weak.

Calmly participating
in heightened vulnerability.

Though I know my escape
is only a doorway ahead,
a short step away,
one decisive move forward,

I can’t resist the urge to melt into you.
©2005-2009 ~EyesOfAFallenAngel
:iconeyesofafallenangel:

Author's Comments

We've ((*mrmcpheezy and myself)) worked together on this since November 18th, 2004. On times, off times, blank times, great times.

I'm happy to have been able to work with such an amazing writer, in my eyes ((as well as many others)). <3.

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Wow, funny because I can barely sense two different perspectives behind the words. And they "melt" into each other exquisitely. Makes me want to collaborate with someone on something. Great job.

--
Let me tell you a secret... The Gods envy us. They envy us because we're mortal, because any moment may be our last. Everything is more beautiful because we're doomed. You will never be more lovely than you are now. We will never be here again.
:iconmaramaitai:
My, my, I just got a notice for a deviation of the same name. Coincidence? Probably.
:iconeyesofafallenangel:
Heh. Yeah, our perspectives did "melt" into eachother quite well. We didn't really have a problem writing this, no major disagreements ((if any)).
Thank you for the comment :)
If you're up for it, as well as the other person, I'd say go for it. It's a great experience.

Thank you for the :+fav: :-D
:iconkentsoul:
I'm glad I found this...It's beautifully lyrical while being sly and scandalous. I wonder if I have an image that suits it.

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Visit the Bookstore!
:iconeyesofafallenangel:
Thank you so very much. :)

If you happen to..I'd love to see it! :D

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